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title: Attention Whore
fandom: HP
pairing: Harry/Snape
rating: NC-17
warnings: dirty talk, D/s
words: 920
summary: PWP. Harry takes a break at a party from all the attention he hates and finds the kind of attention he really needs.
notes: written for [livejournal.com profile] the_con_cept because she said 'Write dirty talk!' and I kinda ran with that. Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] floweringjudas for doing a superfast beta.


Attention Whore

"You have such a lovely, fuckable mouth," Snape said, his breath rasping against Harry's ear.

It was cold, and quiet, and Harry hadn't even known Snape was there on the balcony until he felt his body looming close, slim and cool but still overpowering, somehow. Harry shivered. There was something so deceptive about the smoothness of Snape's voice, and not for the first time Harry wondered just what he was doing. But then Snape's hand skimmed over his back and tangled in his hair, then tightened and pulled his head back roughly. With a shudder of absolute pleasure, his body reminded him why.

"I've been watching you all evening," Snape continued softly. "I saw you slip out -- are you hiding, Potter? Do you truly not enjoy all the attention?"

Harry's hands gripped the crumbling stone of balcony's half-wall. No, he didn't like the attention. He hated being the focus of scrutiny. But this kind of attention, where Snape was holding, touching, talking, taunting ... this was exactly the kind of attention he liked.

Snape's tongue flicked out and touched Harry's earlobe just a split second before sharp, uneven teeth latched on to the side of his neck. Brilliant red pain sparked under his skin. That would leave a mark, which of course Snape already knew. The bastard liked leaving marks for Harry to deal with later.

"I ... I didn't know you were here tonight," Harry said, and found his voice to be shakier than he would have liked.

Snape made a disinterested noise and slipped a hand through the front of Harry's robes, grinding the heel of his hand against Harry's already throbbing erection. Then, holding Harry so that he couldn't move, couldn't turn around to face him, he began to speak again.

"You haven't touched yourself, have you? No one has touched this lovely prick for days and days. How does it feel, to go without, to deny yourself?" Snape whispered, his breath hot in Harry's ear.

"I hate you," Harry said, his voice as weak as his knees.

"Lying little slut," Snape said, chuckling darkly. "You need it so badly you'd let me take you right here."

Rather than deny it, as his more intelligent side was telling him to do, Harry pressed back against Snape's body and made an incoherent, hungry noise that was as close to Please as he could manage.

With a thick sound of impatience, Snape spun Harry around in his arms and kissed him. It was hard and sharp and showed Harry how much Snape owned him, which made Harry groan and clutch at the front of Snape's robes just to remain upright.

"Get down and suck me," Snape said, and then pushed on Harry's shoulders, sending him to his knees.

How long Snape had been planning this, Harry didn't know, but he did know that his robes were already parted at the waist, leaving easy access to his trousers. Harry's fingers barely fumbled with the fly before Snape's proud, hot cock was in his hand. He just barely kept himself from moaning at the sight and feel of it before licking a long, slow stripe up the underside from base to tip.

Snape's own moan was not nearly as restrained, and Harry looked up at him with a grin. It was the first time Harry'd gotten a good look at his face tonight, and he felt his smile falter at the intense black hunger staring down at him, a gaze so powerful Harry thought it might swallow him up.

"I said suck me, Potter," Snape said, and Harry hastened to obey.

The taste of clean, salty skin sliding across his tongue into his mouth made Harry's eyes flutter closed. He forgot where they were, nearly forgot who he was in the moment. The feel of Snape's cock pushing through his lips and down, down, down to bump the back of his throat made Harry moan and grab himself through his trousers.

"None of that, Potter," Snape admonished with a sharp tug to the hair at the nape of his neck. "Put your hands behind your back."

Yes, Harry thought, crossing his wrists at the base of his spine as though they were tied there with Snape's words alone. There would be no touching, no talking, just him giving up control to Snape completely. Hot, needy lust grabbed him, made more powerful by equally hot shame, burning his skin and flooding his thoughts. This was what he needed, what he'd craved in the four days since he'd seen Snape last.

"I'm going to fuck your pretty little mouth, Potter," Snape said, doing just that. "And you're going to take every ... last ... bit." He punctuated the last three words with jabbing thrusts. He had one hand still fisted in Harry's hair while the other traced gentle lines against his jaw and cheekbone. The dichotomy of rough/gentle, soft/hard, made Harry's eyes water and his heart clench.

"Pretty little slut," Snape whispered, and then came, hot and pulsing, down Harry's throat.

Gasping, Harry pulled away. Snape pulled him to his feet and licked the corner of his mouth, then gave him a gentle kiss. Confused, Harry pulled away and stared at him. Snape, as usual, gave nothing away with his eyes.

"You should come by later," Snape said, and then turned, unlocked the door with a wave of his wand, and then walked away. Harry was left standing alone, feeling a bit stunned.

And then, slowly, ignoring his own too-hard cock, Harry smiled.

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2007-06-13 02:20 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] aerynvala.livejournal.com
awesome! I love them kinky. :D

2007-06-13 02:28 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
It's not half as kinky as the fic I'm trying to write for [livejournal.com profile] dooooooom, but this was much easier to write today, for some reason. :) Thank you!

2007-06-13 02:38 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] the_con_cept.livejournal.com
Ohhhhhh, fabulous! Thank you soooooo much! This is mouth-watering, riding that lovely, delicate line between guilt and pleasure, and filled to the brim with lovely imagery! And the dirty talk! THE SIZZLING-SEXY DIRTY TALK! My cup runneth over! Squee! *runs off to gush some more*

2007-06-13 02:43 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Yay, you like it! I'm so glad, 'cause I was worried! But yay! *twirls* Thank you very much.

2007-06-13 02:58 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] darkladyvamp.livejournal.com
Came here via [livejournal.com profile] the_con_cept. So hot and yummy. I love the complicated relationship that they seem to be building.

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2007-06-13 03:22 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] macabre31.livejournal.com
That was perfect. Don't suppose we can see what happens when Harry stops by Severus' place later?

2007-06-13 03:58 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you! And probably not, but you never know. :)

2007-06-13 03:36 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] stormypups.livejournal.com
This is the Snape I would love to be able to write, but fail miserably. Loved it!

2007-06-13 03:56 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
I just asked Faynia who writes Snape when you two write, and she said you, so I want to know WHAT you're talking about, because your Snape is just awesome. Plus, you guys can write actual plot, where I am ... plotless, pretty much. :-P

I'm happy you enjoyed it, thank you!

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2007-06-13 04:20 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] magic-helmet.livejournal.com
*pics up eyes off the floor and puts them calmly back in my head*

That was... that was... guh.

Yep, that sums it up nicely.

It was "guh"

Thanks to [Unknown site tag] for pointing this story out.

2007-06-13 04:21 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] magic-helmet.livejournal.com
the "unknown tag" is for the_con_cept. You've got me all a twitter, and I can't remember how to do a LJ cut!

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2007-06-13 05:26 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] seres-mimosa.livejournal.com
*guh* so hot, it cooked my brain, and now I can't type straight :)

need more, please?!

2007-06-13 05:41 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you! I can't promise to write more of THIS, but I will definitely be writing more of this pairing. :)

2007-06-13 06:50 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] svartalfur.livejournal.com
Great dirty talk! :D

2007-06-13 06:53 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you!

2007-06-13 07:51 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] rory8.livejournal.com
Wow, that's hot and kinda mysterious and, I have to repeat, hot. :D I love the way this ended.

Awesome fic. Thank you. *g*

2007-06-13 08:07 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

2007-06-13 08:46 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] hpstrangelove.livejournal.com
I got over here via someone's rec...I friended you so I would lose track of you other updates! Just in case you're wondering who I am...great Snarry here!

2007-06-13 16:50 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
*waves* Hi, welcome! Thank you for the feedback. :)

2007-06-13 10:24 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] effie-chan.livejournal.com
guh... *dead*

2007-06-13 16:51 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

2007-06-13 23:18 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] angela-snape.livejournal.com
here via [livejournal.com profile] the_con_cept - all I can say is

Wow!

2007-06-13 23:26 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

2007-06-14 07:11 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] bewarethesmirk.livejournal.com
Everything I like in Snarry all here, all at once. Deadly genius.

2007-06-14 07:54 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you! I've never gotten 'deadly genius' feedback before! *is happy*

2007-06-14 11:34 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] dotty23.livejournal.com
rrrrrrr that was hot! good job!

2007-06-14 17:40 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
I adore your icon. And thank you! :)

2007-06-14 12:15 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] hambares.livejournal.com
Wow! Public sex! To bad Snape came so quickly, the naughty talk was hawt! I was hoping that Snape coudl hold on for another - ooooh - 10,000 words. :) Great job!

2007-06-14 18:05 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you. :)

2007-06-14 15:19 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] eriador117.livejournal.com
Oh yes, Dom Snape ;) Lovely hot fic, I wonder if anyone saw them? LOL!

2007-06-14 18:06 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
It's so much fun NOT knowing, don't you think? :) Thank you!

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2007-06-14 18:28 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] iulia_linnea.livejournal.com
Jesus, that's hot!

2007-06-14 18:37 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you!

2007-06-15 01:13 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] fitofpique.livejournal.com
adfkjasdfaeia!

orusdfnadasfsldkjf!

let me try that one more time.

MMMMOMG SO HOT!

2007-06-15 02:10 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
*grins hugely* Yay for incoherent feedback! Thank you. :)

2007-07-08 09:38 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] snarry-reader.livejournal.com
Just a quick comment to let you know that we've added this story to the [livejournal.com profile] snarry_reader on our Master List here (http://snarry-reader.livejournal.com/46840.html).

If you'd like us to make any changes to the link, etc. please let us know.

Thanks,
Gaycrow, on behalf of the Reader.

2007-07-08 15:10 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you!

2007-07-09 17:42 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
:) Thank you!

2007-11-05 05:51 (UTC)
snowpuppies: (HP: Snape + candle)
- Posted by [personal profile] snowpuppies
Oh!

GUH!

Me likey dirty talking Snape.

*wibbles*


PS - I tried to comment to your Harry/Draco piece, "Happy Endings", but the community it's on only allows members to comment, so I'm commenting here to say it was lovely. I especially liked this line: "And then he had trouble thinking, other than more, closer, more, grab him, mine, yes and finally." Very nice!

2007-11-05 05:56 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
:D Thank you so much!

2008-04-15 06:16 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] laurapetri.livejournal.com
sizzling!

2008-04-16 05:21 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you!

2008-11-23 06:50 (UTC)
sophinisba: Gwen looking sexy from Merlin season 2 promo pics (william hack rose by semyaza)
- Posted by [personal profile] sophinisba
I loved this.

2008-11-23 15:08 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you!

2009-05-05 03:34 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] ebilsoki.livejournal.com
Gah. Sorry to join the chorus of similarly incoherent praise, but I can't muster much more at the moment. Very nice. I do so love a dirty-talking!Snape and whore!Harry. :) Thanks for that!

2009-05-05 04:51 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] xanphibian.livejournal.com
Thank you for the kind feedback!

2012-01-20 07:31 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] sarahsezlove.livejournal.com
Yum!!
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