xanphibian: child thumbing their nose with the text, "NO" (Default)
title: "Aztec Spanne" or "Weird Spuffy Thing" or just "Spanne"
pairing: Spike/Buffy
rating: NC-17
length: about 6400

notes: It's amnesia!fic, which is still one of my bulletproof kinks. I started writing this in November of 2003 and finished January 2004. I wanted to write something without angsting over it. I didn't edit, I didn't even look twice at it. Every snippet was written directly into the LJ update journal page. At the end, I had the idea that I might possibly rewrite it as an actual fic, complete with proper grammar and actual backstory and some kind of epilogue. That never happened. Now when I look at it, I don't think it needs an epilogue.

It's been locked up in my journal for a while, and I haven't minded. But I'm reposting it now, all 11 short parts together, for your reading enjoyment. It's still just as rough as it was, although I did a quick spellcheck. Strangely enough, I think I only found 2 misspelled words.

I kinda wish I could do this again. I felt free and creative when I was writing it. Maybe I'll 'write' something like this again sometime.

I'm reposting it now because I'm making a masterlist of my fics on LJ, and I wanted to put this in one place so I didn't have to link to lots of little parts.


She was walking home to her crap apartment one day and got hit by a city bus. )
xanphibian: child thumbing their nose with the text, "NO" (bob: pretty)
So... need a little feedback, here. And I don't mean, "Dude, that rox!" I mean... help me out here. Give me your honest opinion. How's the description? Does anything jar you? There's not much here to worry about in the way of characterization, but if any thing sticks out at you, let me know. Does it grab you? If not, any idea why? My main concern is... is it boring? I know my writing is pretty much technically sound, but... does it flow? I know it's not prose or anything...

*kicks self*

Shut the fuck up, Green, and let them read it!

Okay... Here be the snippet )

This may not be the best time to be posting it, this being Buffy day and all, but I'm working on it while I wait for my download to finish. Did I mention that the first 2 files I downloaded off of KaZaA were fakes? And buffy.nu cuts off after 3 hours of download, and the zip file is incomplete when it happens. *pulls out hair*

Oh, and then there's all this hullabaloo over Spuffy writers writing Spander. Heh... good thing I'm not all famous and shit (she says, sour grapes totally out of reach) so I don't have to deal with that. *snicker*

ETA: Fixed the italics. Or rather, the lack of italics. Or at least I think I got them. That's the suck ass thing about copy/paste.

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